You may have to re-submit this...`
I liked this, but I really think that you should tweak this flash a little bit. You know that part in your movie where the screen is black for like 10 seconds? I suggest you shorten that (or at least put a "Later" caption or something) - I had almost closed the movie 'cause I thought it was done. Also, I'd kinda work with the voices during the phone scene at the beginning, or just omit that part completely, since the Toxic music video part is good on its own.
I voted 5 to save this, but if this gets blammed, I just wanna let you know that you ALMOST made it (it was at 1.74 when I voted). So, with a little minor adjustments, I'm sure you'll make it through the second time :)